The paper is ready, its required a bit of enhancement.
change the picture under A) pick a good. and add a picture from diet center https://www.dietcenter.com.sa
add two graph,
the first one under WTP. the table is already their and only required nice and clear graph that show the WTP.
second one under the analysis of attribution. I have put a sample attached screen shoot. we might need focus more on the second attribution and add additional words, which is offering free wight check service to older people as it will add value.
the last part is D- respond to this market knowledge. I would recommend to write more about free wight service as it will be social service (no company done it so far) and it will add value to the name of the company at country wise that is caring about people health and it’s not only about gaining money.
finally, look at the paper all and you might do some adjustment as required.